🗓 DAY 10 — A Good Day
🎯 Writing Task
Look at the picture.
Write 8–12 sentences about this moment.
Your story must:
✔ Explain what happened before
✔ Show feelings clearly
✔ Tell what happened after
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🧠Think First (1 Minute)
Answer these questions before writing:
Why was she nervous?
What happened last year?
What did she feel when she heard her name?
What changed after she won?
⚠ Do not skip this part.
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✍ Writing Frame (Use This Structure)
Paragraph Guide:
1–3 → What happened before
4–6 → The emotional moment
7–10 → What happened after
You can start like this:
Before this moment, …
At first, she felt …
When her name was called, …
After that, …
From that day, …
(Ini bukan optional. Ini semi-wajib.)
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🆘 If You Feel Stuck — Choose ONE Rescue
🔹 Add more “before”
What problem did she have?
🔹 Add more emotion
How did her heart feel? Fast? Calm?
🔹 Add more “after”
Did this change her confidence?
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✅ Before You Start writing at your note— Checklist
Did you:
☐ Explain what happened before?
☐ Show at least 2 different feelings?
☐ Explain what happened after?
☐ Write 8–12 sentences?
If not → Revise.
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