Last Week Review
✏ Teaching Model
❌ Version 1 — Weak Student Writing
She is sitting on her bed. She is looking at her phone. It is night time. She is thinking about last week. Last week was busy.
🔎 Why Is This Weak?
Hanya deskripsi gambar.
Tidak ada detail tentang minggu itu.
Tidak ada emosi spesifik.
Tidak ada perubahan.
Tidak ada refleksi.
Ini bukan review. Ini deskripsi.
🔁 STEP 1 — Add BEFORE (Model 1: What Happened Last Week?)
She was sitting on her bed at night and looking at her phone. She was thinking about her week. Last week was very busy because she had many school assignments. She also had a small argument with her best friend.
✔ Ada isi minggu. ✔ Ada potensi emosi.
🔁 STEP 2 — Add Emotional Turning Point (Model 3)
She was sitting on her bed at night and looking at her phone. Last week was very stressful because she had many assignments. She also argued with her best friend, and it made her feel sad.
However, she finished all her tasks on Friday. She also talked to her friend and said sorry. Slowly, she started to feel better.
Now, she felt calmer while thinking about everything.
✔ Perubahan emosi: stressed → sad → relieved → calm
🔁 STEP 3 — Add AFTER (Model 2: Reflection & Lesson)
She was sitting on her bed at night and looking at her phone. Last week was stressful because she had many assignments. She also argued with her best friend, and she felt upset.
However, she finished her tasks before the deadline. She talked to her friend, and they solved the problem. Slowly, she felt relieved and peaceful.
While looking at the calendar, she realized that every difficult week can teach her something. She promised herself to manage her time better next week.
✅ FINAL STRONG VERSION (8–12 Sentences)
She was sitting on her bed at night and looking at her phone. The room was quiet, and she was thinking about last week. It was a stressful week because she had many assignments to finish. She also had a small argument with her best friend.
At first, she felt overwhelmed and sad. However, she worked hard and completed all her tasks before Friday. She also talked to her friend and apologized. Slowly, she started to feel relieved.
Now, as she looked at the calendar on the wall, she felt calm. She realized that even a difficult week can help her grow. She decided to start the new week with a better plan.
🎯 Teaching Point for Blog
Day 14 bukan action story.
Ini reflection story.
Struktur tetap sama:
Past Events → Emotional Struggle → Resolution → Lesson
Tapi nadanya lebih tenang dan dalam.
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